11-30-09 When I was on the cruise
On Friday, my friend named Bryan gave me a little stuffed animal. His name was Freddy. We were in the Taj MaHal at night before a show started. When the show started, my dad bought some jucie(juice) for me and my brother. When I got the juice, I pretended that my Freddy was drinking the juice.
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［老妈注］：
这篇流水账写了两页纸，正反两面，鼓励一下：）
看小朋友的作文很有意思。因为都不是命题作文，想写什么就写什么，从小朋友所写的内容可以看出哪些是孩子生活中印象最深的人和事。
大娃和Freddy :
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